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Every year the year eights go to a leadership camp and train to be better leaders.
And this year I got to go on this camp along with the year eights of 2018.
I was most excited about the activities that we would do, there was archery,air rifles,paintballing and much more.
But one of my favorite activities was the go cart.
As I waited in line for what felt like all day it was finally my turn I put a helmet on and got in and started driving,
It felt like I was going 100 miles per hour as I flew past the cones mud flicked from the front tyres on to my face now my vision went blurry.
I had just pass the start line and I could barely see were I was going
I drifted around a sharp corner and swerved around a cone finally
But sadly my turn was over.
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