Wednesday, 4 November 2015

train track

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On Wednesday afternoon at Pt England School Mr Bax was showing us this photo. Then Mr Bax said “this isn’t real” then suddenly a witch walked into the classroom and said “it is real.” Suddenly I found myself sitting in a train. When I looked out the window I saw it was real. I felt absolutely shocked. I saw that the front of the train was leaping off the train track. I was about to jump off because I didn’t want to die. Luckily before I jumped Tinkerbell came flying towards the train. She sprinkled her magic fairy dust on the train. The train then flew to Candy Land. Everything there was sugar coated and tasted like best thing I have ever had. Since that delicious day I have had diabetes.   

4 comments:

  1. Wow! Great storytelling Justus.
    Do you think you could make an animation of your story?
    I would love to see that!
    Um…just one thing though…I don't think you have diabetes?
    Is that still part of your storytelling?

    Keep up the creative writing uso.

    Love,
    Dad.

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  2. What a twist at the end. I am pleased that Tinkerbell was able to save you from certain death.
    I do love your imaginative stories J.
    :-)

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  4. WHAT A CRACK UP! I love this creative story J, the Diabetes at the end was a strong way to finish your story, keep up the awesome stories Jj.

    Love You

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