Thursday, 12 February 2015

My Holiday at the Beach

In the holiday me, my family and friends went to the beach. I made a sand castles with my friends and ate ice-cream.

Jack, Frankie and I made sandcastles. They were big, tall and some were small. We decorated them with shells. We put a flag on top of our biggest sandcastle.

After that I ate cookies and cream. It was really tasty. It was nice to have something cold on a hot day.

I really liked the hot sun at the beach and the big chunks of cookie in my ice cream. I wish I could go there more often.


  1. Welcome back to your blog Justus. I enjoyed your story very much. Trust you to sneak food in to a holiday recount. You've crafted your paragraphs well and this makes your story easy to read and interesting.
    Go Justus!!!

  2. Fantastic work Justus I loved your story about your holiday at the beach and it was and interesting story keep up.

    Go for Gold Justus :D

  3. Well done Justuss I love your interesting story about the beach. Hope you had fun can't wait to read your next blog writing.

    Keep the good work up.

  4. Hi my uso! Hows your day? When are you going to post up something new on your blog?