Tuesday, 12 June 2018

year eight leader ship camp

Recount includes a series of events
A variety of sentence structures have been used (simple/compound/complex)
Adverbs have been used (swiftly, happily, etc)
Includes reflection on the event - I felt… because...
Includes at least 3/5 senses (see, smell, hear, feel & taste)
Includes a variety of punctuation (. ! ? , “ )

Every year the year eights go to a leadership camp and train to be better leaders.
And this year I got to go on this camp along with the year eights of 2018.

I was most excited about the activities that we would do, there was  archery,air rifles,paintballing and much more.

But one of my favorite activities was the go cart.
As I waited in line for what felt like all day it was finally my turn I put a helmet on and got in and started  driving,
It felt like I was going  100 miles per hour as I flew past the cones mud flicked from the front tyres on to my face now my vision went blurry.

I had just pass the start line and I could barely see were I was going
I drifted  around a sharp corner  and swerved around a cone finally
But sadly my turn was over.

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